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Chairman Hu
11-16-2005, 05:01 PM
The Su-30MKK2 page:

On the Su-30MKK2 section, on the first line of the 2nd paragraph talking about the flying of two prototypes, it said Su-20MK2 instead, this is minor, but correcting it should take more than 10 sec

The testing of two prototypes of the Su-20MK2 began around early 2002. Compared to the MKK version in service with the PLAAF, the Su-30MK2 features an improved precision-attack capability and an entirely new C4ISTAR (command, control, communications, computers, intelligence, surveillance, target acquisition and reconnaissance) role not previously hinted at. The aircraft’s new N001VEP fire-control radar is specifically modified to launch the Kh-31 (NATO codename: Kh-17A Krypton-A) long-range supersonic anti-ship missile

Thanks




Dongfeng
11-16-2005, 05:26 PM
to be quite frank, I don't even know what it should be called. Some source call it MK2 as a derivation of the Su-30MK, others call it MKK2 as it is the second model sold to China (MKK). Any suggestions?

Chairman Hu
11-16-2005, 06:42 PM
thats not what i meant, I mean the Su-20 part is wrong, i meant it should be Su-30MK2 instead Su-20MK2

Dongfeng
11-19-2005, 06:04 AM
Corrcted. :)

Wingman
12-05-2005, 04:59 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/fighter/j8b.asp

For J-8III description, it should be "crashed" not "crushed."

Dongfeng
12-05-2005, 12:57 PM
corrected. Thank you, please keep them coming

MIGleader
12-05-2005, 03:57 PM
sone ive noticed almost endless spelling errors, well just do it bit by bit
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/default.asp

submarine guns? submachineguns

MadMax
12-19-2005, 07:00 PM
under the small arms section it says rocket propelled granade, it should be grenade

Obcession
01-03-2006, 12:06 AM
Under PLA section, Paramilitary, Reserve Forces, in the second paragraph on the page, there's a sentence that says: "...Through theoretically still important in the Chinese military system..." It should be though not through

Dongfeng
01-03-2006, 12:57 PM
Spot on! That's something even spelling check cannot detect.

Corrected. Thanks

swimmerXC
01-16-2006, 09:31 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/default.asp
"Type 81 assault rilfe"
suppose to be Type 81 assault rifle

Obcession
01-21-2006, 11:13 PM
From the Type 64 SMG page:
The Type 64 is China's first specially designed low flash, suppressed submachine gun. It is mainly equipped by the PLA scout and sepcial operation units.

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/jssmg.asp

This page has two broken links, the one leading to the two other SMG's.

From http://www.sinodefence.com/army/antitank/ptl02.asp, the tank destroyer page:

The PTL02 wheeled assault tank destroyer armed with a 100mm rifled gun was developed by NORINCO for the PLA new light (rapid reaction) mechanised infantry divisions. The vehicle has a three-man turret derived from the Type 88 MBT, and a 6X6 wheeled chassis based on the WZ551 APC. Chinese officials have confirmed that the vehicle is now in production.

The 105mm main gun of the tank destroyer is capable of engaging lightly armoured vehicles and fortifications, but is unable to destroy a heavily armed main battle tanks (MBT). NORINCO is developing new tank destroyers based on a more powerful 120mm smoothbore main gun and a heavier 8X8 wheeled chassis.

The first paragraph says it is equipped with a 100mm gun while the second says 105mm.

The tank destroyer has a crew has a crew of four (commander, gunner, loader and driver).

MIGleader
03-08-2006, 05:33 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/trainer/default.asp

Says su-27UKB, not UBK, and Yokovlov instead of Yakovlov

MrClean
03-08-2006, 07:24 PM
Defence in SinoDefence.com should be spelled defense, but since there is already a sinodefense.com, I am sure that Sinodefence.com is spelled that way on purpose. But since we are talking grammar, I thought I'd point that out:D

swimmerXC
03-08-2006, 07:33 PM
Defence in SinoDefence.com should be spelled defense, but since there is already a sinodefense.com, I am sure that Sinodefence.com is spelled that way on purpose. But since we are talking grammar, I thought I'd point that out:D

A site with a bunch of ads :mad:
http://www.sinodefense.com/
Dong Feng lives in England so "Defense" is spelled "Defence" there.... the REAL english way or british english

Q: Did you mistype your domain "sinodefense" as "sinodefence"?

A: No. In British English it is spelled as defence rather than defense in American English. The contents of the this website are all written in British English.

Source (http://www.sinodefence.com/others/faq.asp)

Dong Feng
03-13-2006, 11:01 AM
A site with a bunch of ads

Hi, Swimmer, are you referring to SinoDefence.com? :)

KYli
03-13-2006, 12:36 PM
Mod, is this guy truely the Dongfeng we know or somebody pretend to be him. If this guy is fake, we should ban him for using respectful Dongfeng name.:D He looks quick suspious to me, since he is newly register and have different user name.

Gollevainen
03-13-2006, 12:43 PM
He is the main man...he created this Dong Feng account in the begining of the new forum to prevent anyone else using variations of his name...

But i'm as confused as the rest of you why he uses it now instead the administrative Dongfeng??

Ender Wiggin
03-13-2006, 01:44 PM
while we're on spelling corrections lets go over every single one of Gollevainen's posts :D j/k

Dongfeng
03-13-2006, 03:29 PM
Damn, it is so hard to pretend to be someone here ;)

Please see here for an explaination: http://www.sinodefenceforum.com/showthread.php?t=1429

Dongfeng
03-13-2006, 03:40 PM
to obcession: thank you for your correction. I've changed the pages

Gollevainen
03-13-2006, 04:19 PM
while we're on spelling corrections lets go over every single one of Gollevainen's posts

Why i'm always hearing this???....ei oo helppoo suomipojalle tää englannin kielinen muailma. ;)

But lets us cut the chit-chat in this section ok?

swimmerXC
03-13-2006, 05:36 PM
Hi, Swimmer, are you referring to SinoDefence.com? :)

nah, this site SinoDefense
http://www.sinodefense.com/ :roll:

Dongfeng
03-14-2006, 06:01 AM
I see what you mean now. When I first started I didn't have enough money to register both domains. When I tried to register sinodefense.com, someone registered this demain already.

Obcession
03-29-2006, 07:47 PM
On the '95 page:

"The Type 95 assault rifle was first seen fielded by the PLA Hong Kong garrison troops in 1997, and later entered service with special operations forces (SOFs), airborne corps and marine corps. However, it seems that the PLA is not entirely satisfied with the weapon’s performance. A range of technical problems and design flaws were reported during the initial fielding, and the Type 95 is unlikely to replace the Type 81 assault rifle to become the standard individual weapon in the near future.



The Type 95 was first seen fielded by the PLA Hong Kong garrison troops in 1997, and later entered service with special operations forces (SOFs), airborne corps and marine corps. However, the PLA seems not entirely satisfied with its performance as a range of technical problems and design flaws were reported during the initial fielding. In addition, the fact that the air force and navy are given high priority in China’s defence budgets also slowed the speed of the Type 95 replacing the elder Type 81 and Type 56 rifles in service with the PLA. "

Two paragraphs repeat for a few lines.

netspider
03-30-2006, 11:21 AM
on the YJ8 page
http://www.sinodefence.com/missile/antiship/yj8.asp
Description about YJ-82

An improved variant designated C-802A was revealed during the Defence Systems & Equipment International (DSEI) Exhibition held in London in September 2050. This variant features an increased range of 180km.

2050 should be 2005, right?

Wingman
04-02-2006, 09:14 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/weapon/em52mine.asp


The MINE is unguided, not the "mind", lol

Dongfeng
04-04-2006, 08:58 AM
well, my mind was unguided :o

I'll get it amended once I finish work

MIGleader
04-10-2006, 08:56 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/missile/airlaunched/pl8.asp

Under design,
"The PL-5 is almost identical to the U.S. AIM-9G Sidewinder"

Under performance, it says:
"The main features of the PL-9 include"

it should be 8, right?

Dongfeng
04-11-2006, 01:53 PM
Well, thanks for point it out. Actually it was not meant to be seen by you since the update for this section has not officially finished yet. You must be checking every page of the website everyday, MiGleader ;)

Anyway, it been error corrected

Dongfeng
04-11-2006, 01:55 PM
By the way, have you seen the new left-menu on the PL-8 and J-10 page? I am experimenting this new layout now. Please tell me what you guys think of that change.

MIGleader
04-11-2006, 04:09 PM
Its quite convienient. I like it.

BTW, i see the entire air launched missle section has been updated, but is not listed in the recent updates. why?

Dongfeng
04-12-2006, 12:01 PM
It hasn't been finished yet. I still have YJ-6, R-73/AA-11, TY-90 to do. Once these are finished (possibly by the Easter weekend), I'll put it on the latest updates list.

Wingman
04-19-2006, 09:28 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/specialaircraft/y8ew.asp

Last paragraph:
emergence landing --> emergency landing?
colluding --> colliding?

http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/specialaircraft/y8balancebeam.asp
Radar:
Should it has similar performance to the Swedish radar...
I think it should be "have"

Dongfeng
04-20-2006, 02:35 PM
thanks, amended.

Wingman
04-22-2006, 04:27 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/crewserved/type98.asp

Last paragraph: night vision, gunner

xihaoli
04-22-2006, 05:44 PM
China's secret war winning weapon:

TYPE 87 (QLZ87) 35MM GRENADE LAUNCHER

Rate of fire: (sustained) 45 rds/min
Grenade weight: 250kg

Destroying entire beach heads in under 5 minutes.

(http://www.sinodefence.com/army/crewserved/type87grenade_35mm.asp)

Dongfeng
04-23-2006, 09:47 AM
amended, many thanks

MIGleader
05-25-2006, 05:34 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/airlift/b7373.asp

The picture displays the plane as #4026, but you called it #2046

Dongfeng
05-27-2006, 10:22 AM
corrected. Thanks, MiGleader

crazyinsane105
06-10-2006, 02:26 AM
http://sinodefence.com/army/crewserved/type87grenade_35mm.asp

The second paragraph under "Programme":

The weapon delivers 250kg HE or HEAT grenades in either single or burst mode, with a sustained rate of fire of 45rds/min.

That would be 250 g of HE. I would find it quite hard to see somebody lifting a grenade launcher weighing several hundred pounds.:rofl: :rofl:

Dongfeng
06-11-2006, 02:21 PM
corrected :o

T-U-P
06-12-2006, 01:45 AM
it's in the sinodefence news about the crashed AEW plane, it says it's a KJ-200, but most other news agencies have it as a KJ-2000.

http://www.sinodefence.com/news/2006/news06-06-08.asp

swimmerXC
06-12-2006, 07:20 AM
it's in the sinodefence news about the crashed AEW plane, it says it's a KJ-200, but most other news agencies have it as a KJ-2000.

http://www.sinodefence.com/news/2006/news06-06-08.asp

It's the KJ-200 not KJ-2000
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/1383/kj200611068uy.jpg

T-U-P
06-14-2006, 01:12 AM
are you sure it's that plane that crashed? most of the website i went to claim it to be a KJ-2000:
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/specialaircraft/kj2000.asp

Dongfeng
06-14-2006, 05:55 PM
Actually I am making a point here: It was New York Times who reported that it was a KJ-2000 but I doubted if they knew the difference between KJ-200 and KJ-2000. Most media reports copied the story from NYT and I believe that it was a KJ-200, or at least something based on Y-8.

swimmerXC
07-03-2006, 11:27 PM
The weapon was intended for rough military use, and has strong tolerant to water adn dust.

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/type88sniperrifle.asp

Dongfeng
07-06-2006, 12:00 PM
Corrected. Thank you

WEN?
07-23-2006, 02:08 AM
OPERATORS

Unit Base MRAF/Fleet Aircraft type
Flight Test & Training Centre Cangzhou, Hebei Beijing Su-30MKK
PLAAF 3rd Div Wuhu, Anhui Nanjing Su-30MKK
PLAAF 18th Div Datuopu AFB, Changsha, Hunan Guangzhou Su-30MKK
PLAAF 29th Div Quzhou, Zhejiang Nanjing Su-30MKK
PLANAF 4th Div Ningbo, Zhejiang Ease Sea Fleet Su-30MK2

http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/fighter/su30.asp

SteelBird
09-19-2006, 04:44 AM
Hi Mods:

I found a possible mistake on the main site of SinoDefence, but I forgot which thread to post it, so just post it here. Please move this post to a suitable thread if possible:

Unconfirmed reports suggested that the development of the Type 054 was delayed by the lack of a suitable propulsion system. Production of the first-of-class, Ma’anshan (pennant number 525) did not start until late 1002. The ship was launched on 11 September 2003 at Hudong-Zhonghua Shipyard in Shanghai. This was followed by the second hull Wenzhou (penant number 526) on 30 November 2003 at Huangpu Shipyard in Guangzhou. Both ships were commissioned in 2005 and they are deployed by the PLA Navy East Sea Fleet.

I think the correct sentence should be 2002

http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/surface/type054jiangkai.asp

Dongfeng
09-25-2006, 05:10 PM
the above has been corrected. thanks

T-U-P
11-12-2006, 09:04 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/airlift/b737.asp
The PLA Fair Force (PLAAF) is currently operating nine Boeing 737 passenger jets to provide domestic and international air transportation to senior government and military officials.
Should be "air" not "fair".

SteelBird
11-28-2006, 01:21 AM
WS-1E

The WS-1E is the 122mm multiple rocket system developed by SCAIC as a successor to the PLA’s current Type 81 122mm rocket system. It is similar to the Type 90 122mm rocket system and did not enter production. A WS-1E rocket battalion is equipped with:

DZ-88B firing command truck (5 men): 1;
MF-40 rocket launch truck (3 men): 6;
Rockets per launch truck: 120~160;

WS-2

During the 2004 Zhuhai Air Show, SCAIC revealed its latest WS-2 multiple launch rocket system. The weapon is fitted with 6 box-shape launchers and fires 400mm rockets to a maximum range of 200km. The WS-2 is fitted with a primitive cascade inertial terminal guidance to compensate the degraded accuracy cause by the long distance flight of the rocket. A WS-1E rocket battalion is equipped with:

This may be a spelling mistake due to copy and paste. Please check!

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/mrl/weishi.asp

Dongfeng
12-01-2006, 01:10 PM
I've corrected it. Thanks

SteelBird
12-04-2006, 12:08 AM
(30 Nov 06) Two Russian engine manufacturers, Salut and Saturn, are currently competing to supply their engines to upgrade China’s Su-27 Flanker fighter fleet. The PLAAF is planning to initially acquire 52 engines worth US$800 million to upgrade 26 Su-27 fighters in 2007~08. This may be followed by a second acquisition to upgrade an additional 22 fighters

This gave me a jump when I first read it, 52 engines cost $800 millions! However if you read the detail it says $180 millions. Might be a spelling mistake, pls check.

Dongfeng
12-05-2006, 05:39 PM
yeah, it should be US$180 million. I've corrected it. Thank you

SteelBird
12-05-2006, 09:07 PM
Hi, DongFeng

I'm afraid I need to point out another spelling mistake...

Sorry for my last post that I forgot to put the link. Fortunely you could find it.

With multiple in-flight refuelling, the Su-30MKK taking-off from inland airbases in China conceivably could conduct air strikes as far away as Guam, Australia, or the Indian Ocean, or be able to loiter for significant periods over contested areas of the South China Sea. According to Russian sources, the PLAAF has requested the Su-30MKK with structure reinforced to enable the maximum rake-off weight to be increased to 34.5t, comparing to 30.5t for the original version Su-30 and 33.5t for the Su-30MKI designed for the Indian Air Force. The PLAAF has reportedly asked for a limited number of the planes to have the capability of further increasing take-off weight to 38.8t. The plane will then be capable of transporting 8t of weapons and supplementary fuel tanks in operations.

http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/fighter/su30.asp

Dongfeng
12-07-2006, 07:02 AM
Doh! that's what happens when you rush things. I'll get this corrected this evening. Thank you very much

SteelBird
01-29-2007, 01:48 AM
Hi, A spelling mistake. Duplicated "T", one big and one small... :)

Tthe centre of the “Qu Dian” system is a dedicated military communications satellite codenamed FengHuo-1 (FH-1) first launched in January 2000. The Pentagon described that system as "a secure, jam-resistant, high capacity data link communications system for use in a tactical combat." It was China’s first space-based communication platform to provide military units with both C-band and UHF communications. The “Qu Dian” system allows theatre commanders to communicate with and share data with all forces under joint command.

http://www.sinodefence.com/electronics/c3i/qudian.asp

Dongfeng
01-29-2007, 12:47 PM
corrected. Thank you very much

Ryz05
01-30-2007, 09:14 PM
For the ZBD2000, it says under Programme "Compared to the BMD-3, the Chinese airborne combat vehicle is slightly higher, and its main gun (25mm) differs to the Russian design (30mm)," but under Armament, it says "The main armament of the IFV variant is a 25mm cannon..." Then under specifications, it is "Weapons: One 30mm cannon." So I'm wondering if it's the 30mm or the 25mm? Thank you.

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/armour/zbd2000.asp

Dongfeng
02-01-2007, 01:04 PM
It should be 25mm. The figure in the sepcification was wrong. I've corrected it

Thank you for pointing that out

Ryz05
02-01-2007, 08:41 PM
It should be 25mm. The figure in the sepcification was wrong. I've corrected it

Thank you for pointing that out

No problem. I was just curious why they fitted the airborne IFV with 25mm, while the new Type 97 IFV is equipped with a coaxial 30mm. Wouldn't it simplify logistics just to have them all be 25 or 30mm?

Dongfeng
02-02-2007, 07:11 AM
Now you just made me think: is it really 25mm gun as I originally believed, or is it actually 30mm? I need more study on this...

Ryz05
02-05-2007, 08:58 AM
In the table on the page about fighter planes http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/fighter/default.asp The bottom three sections all misspelled "fighter" as "figther."

Dongfeng
02-06-2007, 04:56 PM
In the table on the page about fighter planes http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/fighter/default.asp The bottom three sections all misspelled "fighter" as "figther."

corrected, thank you very much :)

Ryz05
02-06-2007, 07:56 PM
In the page http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/littoral/default.asp I think the Wosao Class Mine layer vessel link should be directed to this http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/littoral/wosao.asp , but instead, it's this http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/littoral/wolei.asp

Your new updates are great! Hope they happen more often. :)

Ryz05
02-06-2007, 07:58 PM
No problem. If there's any other spelling mistakes, I will let you know.

Dongfeng
02-07-2007, 04:29 PM
I've corrected the link to Wosao class. thanks

SteelBird
02-15-2007, 08:46 PM
OK, here, one F missing...

The Type 79 submachine gun is more or less patterned after the Type 56 (AK-47) assault rifle. It uses gas-operated, rotary bolt action with short stroke gas piston located above barrel. The bolt group and fire mode/safety switch are similar to those of the Type 56 assault rile. The barrel, receiver, pistol grip, magazine and shoulder stock are all made from stamped steel. The weapon fires 7.62 X 25mm pistol cartridge in either single or fully automatic mode. Ammunitions are fed from a straight box magazine that holds 20 rounds. Shoulder stock folds up and forward when not in use.

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/type79smg.asp

Ryz05
02-16-2007, 11:36 AM
For HMMWV, http://www.sinodefence.com/army/transport/hmmwv.asp , "Gebi desert" should be "Gobi desert."

Also, "Bother (should be both) vehicles have limited armour protection against small calibre weapons." http://www.sinodefence.com/army/transport/hmmwv.asp

Thanks!

Dongfeng
02-16-2007, 01:34 PM
Thank you both for the correction. I've corrected the Type 79 and HMMWV page

Ryz05
02-17-2007, 03:58 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/helicopter/mi173.asp "rear cargo doors removed from (should be 'for') easy access"

Nice updates in the small arms section!

Dongfeng
02-18-2007, 05:55 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/helicopter/mi173.asp "rear cargo doors removed from (should be 'for') easy access"

Nice updates in the small arms section!

corrected! :)

SteelBird
02-20-2007, 08:24 PM
hi Dong Feng

This might be a spelling mistake, please check:

The M99 is a large-calibre, heavy anti-material sniper rifle developed by China Poly Group Corporation and 9656 Factory for the export market. The weapon was design certified in April 2005. The W99 resembles the British Accuracy International AS50 sniper rifle in appearance, but it differs to the latter in internal design.

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/m99_sniper.asp

Ryz05
02-20-2007, 09:38 PM
hi Dong Feng

This might be a spelling mistake, please check:



http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/m99_sniper.asp

I love playing word searches! The "W99" should really be "M99" right? :roll:
It's great others are helping to find minor spelling errors. Here is one more:

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/transport/all-terrain.asp "suppot" should be "support"

Dongfeng
02-21-2007, 01:52 PM
both errors have been corrected. Thank you.

Ryz05
02-21-2007, 03:31 PM
http://sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/pf97.asp I think "PRO-A Shmel" should be spelled "RPO-A Shmel" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/RPO_flamethrower

The updates are really nice.

Dongfeng
02-23-2007, 11:32 AM
http://sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/pf97.asp I think "PRO-A Shmel" should be spelled "RPO-A Shmel" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/RPO_flamethrower

The updates are really nice.

Yes, you are right. It should be RPO. I've amended the page :)

Ryz05
03-03-2007, 05:40 AM
There seems to be no more spelling mistakes that I can find. Did you run every page with a spell-checker? Thanks!

Dongfeng
03-03-2007, 09:14 AM
There seems to be no more spelling mistakes that I can find. Did you run every page with a spell-checker? Thanks!

Well, I try to be more careful about spelling than before. New pages are all written in MS Word first before being copy-pasted to the web design software. If you see any more errors, please let me know :)

Ryz05
03-03-2007, 04:05 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/strategic/launchvehicle/cz3bc.asp "Unfortunately the CZ-3B experienced experience (delete extra 'experience') an anomaly in attitude (should be 'altitude') (+of) about 2 seconds after launch at Xichang Satellite Launch Centre..."

http://www.sinodefence.com/strategic/launchvehicle/cz3a.asp "the CZ-3A has a greater geosynchronous transfer orbit capability, greater flexibility for attitude (should be 'altitude') control..."

Ryz05
03-05-2007, 08:03 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/navalmissile/9m317.asp "The PLA Navy (PLAN) is operating both the 9M38 and the more advanced 9M317 missiles, with the former installed on the Russian-built Project 956 Sovremenny class missile destroyers and later (spelled 'latter') on the indigenous Type 052B Guangzhou class missile destroyers."

http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/navalmissile/yj8.asp "There has been speculations that the YJ-8 may have been based on Exocet this (remove unneeded 'this') appears to be groundless."

Ryz05
03-10-2007, 03:05 PM
http://sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/qsz92_01.asp Description says "5.8mm (yellow) and 9mm (brown)," but I see the 9mm as yellow and the 5.8mm as pink. There seems to be something wrong with the color, because 5.8 does not appear yellow and 9mm is not brown. Hope you can correct the confusion. Thanks!

Dongfeng
03-11-2007, 02:03 PM
http://sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/qsz92_01.asp Description says "5.8mm (yellow) and 9mm (brown)," but I see the 9mm as yellow and the 5.8mm as pink. There seems to be something wrong with the color, because 5.8 does not appear yellow and 9mm is not brown. Hope you can correct the confusion. Thanks!

thanks, the above errors have all been corrected.

As to the cartridge, the 9mm should be yellow and the 5.8mm is, well, brown and pink-ish (pink bullet?). I really cannot find a word to describe it.

Ryz05
03-11-2007, 08:50 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/38mm_riotgun.asp "The launcher can be attached to the rifle barrel without requiring (remove 'requiring') dissembling (should be 'disassembling') the rifle itself."

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/qlt89.asp "The QLT89 (also known as Type 89 in PLA designation) is a compact, 50mm “mini motor (should be 'mortar')” equipped by the PLA."

For the cartridge picture, you can say the 9mm has a blunt tip and appears yellow in the picture, while the 5.8mm has a pointy tip and appears brown. The coloration of the two are more or less the same if you look at http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/qsz92_02.asp (9mm) and http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/qsz92_05.asp (5.8mm).

Ryz05
03-11-2007, 09:23 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/strategic/launchvehicle/cz3bc.asp "Unfortunately the CZ-3B experienced an anomaly in attitude (should be 'altitude' + 'of') about 2 seconds after launch at Xichang Satellite Launch Centre, pitching down and yawing to the right."

Dongfeng
03-12-2007, 02:55 PM
Hi, Rzy05, thank you pointing out those errors. I've corrected those pages. In particular thank you for the description about the DAP92 cartridges. :)

Ryz05
03-12-2007, 08:14 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/qlt89.asp "mini motar" (should be 'mortar')

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/transport/type60.asp the specifications table appears a bit large, can you shrink it to normal size like the other pages? Thank you.

Ryz05
03-16-2007, 05:41 PM
http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/r73.asp "The missile is believed to be more capable than most Western-designed SRAAM in current service, and has significantly improved the clsoe (spelled 'close') air combat capability of the PLA."

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/groundattack/jh7_05.asp "The improved JH-7A has a total of 11 external hardpoints for weapons, targeting pods,a nd ('and') drop tanks"

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/kd82.asp Picture captions at bottom appear over-sized.

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/bomb_gp.asp Can you add dimming to the menu? Thank you.

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/groundattack/jh7deployment.asp Can you explain why some lines are dimmed? Thank you.

Ryz05
03-16-2007, 08:20 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/electronics/c3i/national_c3i.asp "Integrated Field Communication System, which integrates voice and data services between PLA headquarters and air, ground/surface, underground, and underwater units. The system is likely to be based on radio communications, fibber-optic ('fibre-optic' or 'fiber-optic') cable and SATCOM"

Dongfeng
03-16-2007, 08:21 PM
http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/r73.asp "The missile is believed to be more capable than most Western-designed SRAAM in current service, and has significantly improved the clsoe (spelled 'close') air combat capability of the PLA."

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/groundattack/jh7_05.asp "The improved JH-7A has a total of 11 external hardpoints for weapons, targeting pods,a nd ('and') drop tanks"

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/kd82.asp Picture captions at bottom appear over-sized.

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/bomb_gp.asp Can you add dimming to the menu? Thank you.

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/groundattack/jh7deployment.asp Can you explain why some lines are dimmed? Thank you.


Hi,

Thank you for the corrections. Please keep them coming.

I've amended the pages you mentioned above.

As to the JH-7 deployment, the serial numbers in light grey are the ones whose existence cannot be confirmed. According to the numbering system, the aircraft should be there but no photo of the aircraft with those numbers have been seen. Only those that have been confirmed in actual photos are in black.

Ryz05
03-16-2007, 08:26 PM
Hi,

Thank you for the corrections. Please keep them coming.

I've amended the pages you mentioned above.

As to the JH-7 deployment, the serial numbers in light grey are the ones whose existence cannot be confirmed. According to the numbering system, the aircraft should be there but no photo of the aircraft with those numbers have been seen. Only those that have been confirmed in actual photos are in black.

I thought maybe you can add a short explanation to the page about the dimmings. Then again, it should be self-explanatory. The website looks great. Thank you.

Ryz05
03-19-2007, 04:39 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/surface/type054jiangkai.asp First picture directs to http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/surface/type054jiangkai1.asp

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/tank/type96.asp WZ-10 instead of Type 96 MBT. Really nice updates.

Ryz05
03-21-2007, 09:25 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/helicopter/wz9.asp "An improved Z-9G “nigh ('night') attack variant” entered PLA service in 2005."

"In 2005 the PLA introduced the new improved Z-9G “nigh ('night') attack variant”, which features an under-nose YY-1 observing and tracking unit developed by Luoyang Electro-Optics Technology Development Centre (EOTDC)."

Ryz05
03-22-2007, 08:33 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/transport/default.asp Shenfei SQF2040 under Light Combat Vehicles redirect to EQ2050. So I'm wondering if you meant to replace it with the EQ2050 title or have a different article on the SQF2040. Thank you.

Dongfeng
03-23-2007, 08:29 AM
Yeah, I was wondering whether I should have a separate SQF2040 page. However, they seem to have been rejected. So at the moment I am undecided

Ryz05
03-29-2007, 03:38 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/chainofcommand/default.asp The font is too small for "Ministry of National Defence." Can you make it normal size? Thank you.

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/mrl/type90.asp "The launcher is mounted on the improved North-Benz 2629 (directs to a broken link) 6X6 truck, which possesses better performance compared to the Yan’an SX2150 truck used by the Type 81."

http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/chainofcommand/cmc.asp "The CMC is usually chaired by a(unneeded 'a') the Chinese President, who is supported by 2~3 vice Chairmen, including the Minister of National Defence."

Can you apply dimmings to menus in http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/lt2.asp and http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/rocket57mm.asp ? Thank you.

Dongfeng
04-02-2007, 09:01 AM
Hi, thank you for those corrections. I finally managed to get these done over the weekend.

Ryz05
04-02-2007, 08:48 PM
Hi, thank you for those corrections. I finally managed to get these done over the weekend.

You're welcome - glad to help. I think you forgot to dim the menu in http://sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/rocket57mm.asp . Thanks.

Ryz05
04-05-2007, 04:08 AM
http://sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/qbu88.asp "It is intended for rough military use, and has and has (extra wordings) strong tolerance to water and dust."

http://sinodefence.com/army/armour/zlc2000.asp Bottom middle pic directs to the wrong picture.

Great updates!

Ryz05
04-09-2007, 01:07 AM
http://sinodefence.com/organisation/groundforces/uniform.asp
"4-colour (light green, dark green, brown and black), sued (used?) by most ground forces units for their summer combat uniforms."

Ryz05
04-10-2007, 06:21 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/transport/bj2022.asp "The initial batch production of vechile (vehicle) was reportedly scheduled to begin in 2006."

kunmingren
04-10-2007, 08:50 PM
hey, great job on those new updates about the army.

i found a spelling error on the j-10 main page, in the first paragraph "attack plane" was spelled attach plane

Ryz05
04-10-2007, 10:27 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/fighter/j10.asp "The aircraft was designed as an air-superiority fighter with ‘beyond-visual-range’ air combat as well as surface attach (attack) capability."

Scratch
04-11-2007, 12:01 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/navalmissile/yj8.asp

YJ-83 (C-803)
The YJ-82 is almost identical to the YJ-82 in appearance
I guess so, perhaps you mean YJ-83 almost identical to YJ-82 ... ?

Dongfeng
04-11-2007, 01:16 PM
Hi, Guys

Thank you for pointing out those errors. I've corrected these pages.

To Ryz05: did you receive the private message I sent to you?

Cheers
DF

Ryz05
04-11-2007, 09:03 PM
Hi, Dongfeng

I've recieved the message and the frontpage looks great. Thank you.

Ryz05
04-14-2007, 09:06 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/tank/type99specifications.asp
"Transmission Mechanical, plaentary (planetary?)"

Ryz05
04-30-2007, 12:23 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/groundforces/uniform.asp
First picture directs to the wrong one. http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/groundforces/infantry_01.asp
"Combat uniforms will include general duty summer and winter combat uniforms and special purpose protection uniforms in four basic camouflage patterns: woodland, desert, urban, and ocean, all in the "Flecktarn" pattern." I'm not sure if they are exactly Flecktarn, because they are not five-colored, but four. Thanks!

Dongfeng
05-01-2007, 02:46 AM
you're right. They look like flecktarn but are four-colour. So I've change it to "four-colour spot pattern"

Ryz05
05-01-2007, 06:25 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/type90riflegrenades.asp
"its hollow changed (charged?) anti-armour warhead can penetrate 80mm of steel armour at an angle of 45 degree"

Ryz05
05-03-2007, 09:29 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/armour/type99command.asp I think you forgot to dim the menu slot for Type 99 Command vehicle. Thank you.

Ryz05
05-07-2007, 04:47 PM
http://sinodefence.com/ "Welcome to Pyongyangs (singular: Pyongyang)"

Ryz05
05-11-2007, 11:40 PM
http://sinodefence.com/electronics/countermeasures/default.asp Home > The Electronic Battlefield > Radar (should be "Electronic Countermeasures")

Ryz05
05-12-2007, 01:52 PM
http://sinodefence.com/strategic/missile/df31.asp though a test in 2001 failed due to unknown reason] (bracket out of place).

http://sinodefence.com/strategic/missile/df31.asp though so fat ("far") no sound evidence has been found to support this claim

Ryz05
05-13-2007, 09:48 PM
http://sinodefence.com/strategic/launchvehicle/cz2e.asp commercial satellite launch business bad (had) been severely damaged by the high failure rate

Ryz05
05-28-2007, 05:17 PM
"In 19996 (1996?), the Central Military Commission decided..." http://sinodefence.com/organisation/groundforces/army-aviation.asp

Ryz05
05-29-2007, 06:49 PM
"Home > Organisation > People's Armed Police > Introduction" (Special Police Units) http://sinodefence.com/organisation/armedpolice/pap-special-police.asp

Ryz05
05-30-2007, 05:58 PM
Home > Organisation > People's Armed Police > Introduction (Internal Guard) http://sinodefence.com/organisation/armedpolice/pap-internal-guard.asp

Ryz05
06-19-2007, 09:44 AM
features a more specious (spacious) cargo cabin http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/airlift/y9.asp

Ryz05
06-28-2007, 09:07 AM
"Iran ahs (has) reportedly received" http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/navalmissile/yj74.asp

Ryz05
06-30-2007, 02:24 PM
unconventioanl (unconventional) threats http://www.sinodefence.com/news/2007/news07-06-29.asp

Ryz05
07-03-2007, 12:44 PM
to avoid collaborate (collateral?) damage http://www.sinodefence.com/army/small_arms/qbu88.asp

sumdud
07-09-2007, 12:51 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/antiaircraft/type65towed37mm.asp

37mm AAA army page
The Type 65 is an obsolete WWII-style manually-operated, optically-sighted anti-aircraft weapon. Operated by a crew of seven men, the recoil-operated 37mm cannons fire the 1,416kg high-explosive (HE) and the 1,455kg high-explosive armour-piercing (HE-AP) rounds with tracer, with a muzzle velocity of 866m/s. The maximum slant range 3,500m. The maximum rage of fire is 160~180 rounds/min. Each cannon is fed by a magazine that holds 5 rounds. A feeding funnel can be fitted for continuous feeding. Later variants of the weapon can be operated by an electrical trigger, enabling multiple guns being fired by a single trigger.

That's 1 powerful gun to shoot a ton of lead every shot.

Ryz05
07-09-2007, 12:23 PM
http://sinodefence.com/organisation/uniform/combat_uniforms_04.asp The picture does not show up.

Dongfeng
07-09-2007, 02:08 PM
the above errors have been corrected. Thanks, guys :)

AssassinsMace
07-17-2007, 04:34 AM
Under the KD-63 page... it says "tirbo" as propulsion.

Ryz05
07-17-2007, 02:10 PM
http://sinodefence.com/navy/sub/type093shang.asp "Soviet nuclear submarine seven (even) before its design..."

http://sinodefence.com/strategic/missile/df15.asp "a range of test launches were conducted in the Gebi (Gobi) Desert"

Under the KD-63 page... it says "tirbo" as propulsion.

http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/weapon/kd63.asp
Length: N/A
Diameter: N/A
Wingspan: N/A
Launch weight: N/A
Warhead: 500kg HE
Propulsion: Tirbojet (Turbojet)
Speed: subsonic
Max range: >200km
Guidance mode: Inertial + satellite mid-course correction + terminal

Dongfeng
07-21-2007, 01:52 PM
all corrected. Thank you guys

Ryz05
07-23-2007, 09:57 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/armour/wz551.asp
"The two variants are deployed in mixture in the PLA 'rapid reactionl (reaction)' light mechanised infantry troops."

Ryz05
07-24-2007, 09:54 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/armour/default.asp ZLC2000 slot directs to ZBD2000 (http://www.sinodefence.com/army/armour/zbd2000.asp) instead.

adeptitus
08-01-2007, 04:56 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/surfacetoairmissile/qw1.asp

The QW-1A jointly developed by 119 Factory and Xi’an Tianwei Electronic System Engineering Ltd. was based on the QW-1, but added with a man-portable target acquisition radar (weight: 30kg; range: 15km). The launcher tube of the QW-1A was also added with a LCD module. The target radar is linked to 4~6 QW-1A firing units via cable of wireless connections. The target information is directly displayed on the gunner’s LCD module, thus increasing the combat effectiveness by forming an integrated air defence network.

=======================

I think it's supposed to say "via cable OR wireless" ?

Ryz05
08-15-2007, 12:21 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/airforce/flight-test-and-training.asp "The school was relocated to its current base in Canxian (now Cangzhou), Heibei (Hebei) Province in June 1959."

Dongfeng
08-18-2007, 04:55 PM
above all corrected! thanks

Ryz05
08-20-2007, 09:04 AM
http://sinodefence.com/navy/sub/type039song_04.asp "The Type 039 Song class has become the backbone of the Chinese conventional submarine fleet (Source: (missing) Chinese Internet)"

http://sinodefence.com/airforce/helicopter/z8-specifications.asp Specifications link is not working.

Ryz05
08-24-2007, 09:43 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/trainer/default.asp prorotype (prototype)

dollarman
08-25-2007, 07:17 AM
In the picture section of the J-8 page, the J-8 is mislabelled the J-10 in all pictures.

Dongfeng
08-28-2007, 01:47 PM
All corrected. Thank you guys

Ryz05
08-31-2007, 04:01 PM
http://sinodefence.com/army/armour/wheeledapc.asp "The new 8X8 wheeled vehicle is produced in a range of variants including infantry fighting vehicle 9IFV), 105mm assault gun, 122mm self-propelled howitzer, and armoured recovery vehicle (ARC)."

http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/helicopter/z8-specifications.asp The link's not working.

http://www.sinodefence.com/army/crewserved/type56aamg.asp Link's not working.

SteelBird
09-12-2007, 02:15 AM
Haven't posted for quite a long time. Today, I suddenly want to compare how powerful an H-6 engine to a Su-27's, and I found that a large aircraf such as the H-6 is less powerful than even the Su-27. Beside that, I also found this:

Runway (landing) 1,655km/h (H-6A); 1,540km/h (H-6D)

http://www.sinodefence.com/airforce/groundattack/h6specifications.asp

AssassinsMace
12-26-2007, 11:48 PM
On the HQ-12 (KS-1) page... 2nd paragraph from the bottom...

"The radio-command KS-1 was designed primarily to engage aircraft and helicopters, but also ahs limited capability against air-to-surface missiles and other air-launched precision guidance weapons."

Ryz05
12-28-2007, 11:20 PM
http://sinodefence.com/army/mrl/phl03.asp

The PHL03 fires 200mm (300mm?) rocket powered by a solid propellant (possibly HTTB) rocket motor.

http://sinodefence.com/army/surfacetoairmissile/ks1.asp

The PLA ahs (has) been testing the KS-1 since the mid-1990s.

The radio-command KS-1 was designed primarily to engage aircraft and helicopters, but also ahs (has) limited capability against air-to-surface missiles and other air-launched precision guidance weapons.

Violet Oboe
01-11-2008, 03:00 AM
Also a brief question about HQ-12/KS-1A:

Dongfeng has grouped the SAM under ´point defence´; though HQ-12 has a slant range of at least 50 km. :confused:

Obviously HQ-12 falls in between S-300/HQ-9 and point defence systems like Tor so a separate category should be considered. (...perhaps something like ´semi-regional´.)

WEN?
01-13-2008, 05:23 AM
In PLA Special Operations Forces section, under infiltration you forgot the t in night vision in the last sentence.

Dongfeng
01-20-2008, 06:13 AM
Guys,

thank everyone who have pointed out the errors. I've corrected them.

To Violet: I have moved HQ-12 to regional air defence system, and change the title of the middle section to "Field Air Defence". The idea is that all systems under the "Regional Air Defence" section are deployed by the PLA Air Force, while all systems under the "Field Air Defence" section are deployed by the ground forces. What do you think

Thanks
Dongfeng

Ryz05
01-21-2008, 03:07 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/groundforces/xinjiang-md.asp

....it has it is subordinated to the Lanzhou Military Region (MR), but with its own subordinated Nanjing (Nanjiang) (Southern Xinjiang) MD, which is equivalent to a regular provincial MD.

Ryz05
01-24-2008, 09:35 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/armedpolice/introduction.asp

...PAP is one the three integral elements of the Chinese armed forces, along with the People’s Liberation Army (PLA) and the militia and reverse (reserve) forces

Ryz05
01-31-2008, 09:50 AM
In this picture http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/uniform/combat_uniforms_03.asp , I'm pretty sure the guy is wearing Woodland camouflage and not Urban camouflage as discription suggests. The same uniform can be found in the 2007 Peace Mission exercise picture http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/uniform/combat_uniforms_05.asp . Also, the uniform is very similar to the Woodland patter seen in this picture http://www.sinodefence.com/organisation/uniform/combat_uniforms_01.asp .

Ryz05
02-03-2008, 03:01 PM
http://sinodefence.com/organisation/armedpolice/hydropower.asp

The 1st Hydropower General Corps is also known as Jiangnan Hrdyopower (Hydropower) and Hydraulic Engineering Company. The 2nd Hydropower General Corps is also known as Jiangxia Hrdyopower (Hydropower)and Hydraulic Engineering Company. The 3rd Hydropower General Corps is also known as Anrong Hrdyopower (Hydropower) and Hydraulic Engineering Company. The PAP Hydropower Three Gorges Dam Command is also known as Anlian Hrdyopower (Hydropower) and Hydraulic Engineering Company.

Ryz05
02-05-2008, 02:35 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/army/crewserved/qjz89.asp

Specifications
Calibre 5.8mm (12.7mm)

Ryz05
02-16-2008, 07:28 PM
http://sinodefence.com/army/mrl/phz89.asp

Trails (Trials) in a weapon testing base and filed units were carried out in 1988......

Ryz05
02-27-2008, 03:50 PM
http://www.sinodefence.com/strategic/default.asp

The PLA Second Artillery Corps also has 600~800 conventional DF-9 (DF-11) (CSS-7) and DF-15 (CSS-6) short-range ballistic missiles, most of which are deployed in the east and southeast regions of the country.

Ryz05
03-02-2008, 06:26 PM
http://sinodefence.com/strategic/mannedspace/shenzhou7.asp

"While conducting the EVA, the astronaut is tied to tied to (redundant) a tether of about 5m..."

Ryz05
04-26-2008, 09:56 PM
http://sinodefence.com/strategic/mannedspace/china-astronauts.asp
The gloves are integrated with the suit but boos (boots) are removable.

Ryz05
05-20-2008, 01:25 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/strategic/spacecraft/beidou1.asp
The satellite suffered from a control system malfunction, which resulted in the solar power penal (panel) unable to expand.

http://www.sinodefence.com/strategic/missile/jl2.asp
The JL-2 SLBM is said to have a maximum range of 8,000km and is callable (capable) of carrying 3~4 multiple independently targetable re-entry vehicles (MIRV)......

http://www.sinodefence.com/strategic/missile/df25.asp
...the missile is believed to be capable of delivering a single and multiple conventional warheads weighting (weighing) 2,000kg and have a maximum range of 1,700km.

PrOeLiTeZ
06-09-2008, 04:38 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/amphibious/type071.asp

Either Im seeing things or is this a MAJOR spelling correction

The first picture on the top left is clearly not "J-10 fighter of the PLAAF 44th Air Division"......lol ^.^......its T-071 LPD its in the Navy-Amphibious Warefare Ships section.....fighter jet :rofl::rofl::roll::roll:

Ryz05
06-16-2008, 12:11 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/support/type6610.asp

The vessel was designed to detect and clear detect and remove (detect and remove) mines for the rest of the fleet.

The four vessels was then enforced by two Type 037 (Hainan class) antisubmarine patrol crafts. (extra period) (hull 281 and 282). The battle has resulted (resulted) in one South Vietnamese corvette being sunk, and another heavily damaged.

After the battle, the PRC regained the control (control) over the Paracel Islands.

AssassinsMace
06-18-2008, 04:01 AM
On the weapons trial ships page...

http://www.sinodefence.com/navy/research_survey/shiyan.asp

Check out paragraphs 4 & 5. The ship types I believe are wrong. One says 51C and the other says 62C. I believe both are suppose to be 52Cs.

WEN?
06-27-2008, 07:32 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/news/2008/news08-06-25.asp

"Both pilots were said to have ejected and parachuted to safety. The (They) suffered from minor injuries and are being treated at local hospitals."

WEN?
06-27-2008, 07:34 AM
http://www.sinodefence.com/news/2008/news08-06-24.asp

"There were also some military hardware and vehicles hidden (in?/under?) camouflage netting."

FriedRiceNSpice
11-20-2008, 01:36 AM
In the last sentence of the second paragraph of the article on the Y-8 Rotodome Airborne Early Warning Aircraft, the world intention is mispelled intension.

T-U-P
11-21-2008, 12:56 PM
The page about Zhuhai Airshow

http://www.sinodefence.com/weapons/report/zhuhai_airshow_2008.asp

In the PLAAF Debut section:
"PLAAF aircraft displayed this year include two two J-10 fighters, ..."
There's an extra "two" there.

wonder if DF still look at this section... >.>

Dongfeng
11-23-2008, 04:07 AM
yes I'm still checking! keep them coming

thank you all for your contribution